Black Poetry : He Doesn't Love You...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another one....lol

    VERSE 1:

    he doesn't love you
    so stop tellin' yourself he does
    he doesn't respect you
    sorry to let you know, he never has
    it makes him feel like a man to think he owns you girl
    the problem with that is, your no one's property girl
    if only you would open your eyes
    you'd see the monster that is in you life so you can


    CHORUS:

    rise
    like a butterfly into the heavens
    fly
    like a dove over the crystal blue waters
    rise
    over the obstacles that come your way
    live with respect for yourself girl
    live without him in your life
    live with respect for yourself
    oh yeah


    VERSE 2:

    do you think its love when he slaps you across your face?
    do you think its love when he throws you all around the place?
    you need to understand, you have the power girl
    to put and end to all his madness girl
    and see that you are worth more than the worthless names he calls you so you can


    (back to chorus)


    HOOK:

    you need to understand that your life is on the line
    you need to stand ground and take control of your life
    before you die...
     
  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, :wave:

    I love this!! :thanks: for the great read!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes i loved dis here u gonna have a fat track fo real
    fly girl free self ........yesssssssssssssss!
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot sierra and rich!!:)
     
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    my friend needs to read this.:sad: nice song :)
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks swtT...i wrote this for my friend...
     
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