Black Poetry : He doesn't know...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cocobutterskyn, Nov 17, 2008.

  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    each
    time
    he
    flows
    I
    unwind
    soul
    deep
    and
    lie
    between
    his
    wondrous
    lines

    he doesn’t know

    I
    open w i d e
    to allow his verbs to
    vibrate thoroughly
    inside me

    he doesn’t know

    every
    noun and then
    he blends adjectives in
    that stream in my eardrums
    create serenading notes that
    undeniably woo me

    I
    dig
    the
    hell
    out
    the
    way
    he
    pimps
    the
    alphabet


    using
    nectarous wordplay
    to foreplay me into mental
    rhapsody

    he doesn’t know

    my
    imagination
    literally
    imagines

    feeling
    him spitting
    be-bobbing syllables from poetic pages that
    boost my attention
    to an
    un-divided-we
    that
    arouse
    my hopeless
    romantic soul to
    overflow at the end of each piece
    he
    breaks
    off
    in
    me

    he doesn’t know

    I
    pray
    he
    never loses
    his way with word
    in me

    Cause…

    every
    time
    he
    flows

    I

    flow

    too






    Poeticallysprungsouldeep!
    Coco:heart:



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    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love your style, your lyrics and metaphors are sensual. You write in pictures and I’m always captured in your emotions. I have read some of your other work thank you for feeding me
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes...I definitly agree....he may not know.

    I think I might have ta tell him! he he he
    :wink:
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i definitely know a man like that...
    i wonder where his number is...
    this was most definitly nice
    5 stars!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow he must be laying down some tyte nouns / and verbs crossing them wit adjectives that say ahhhhhhhh! this was red hot and he should be honored ,
    he might not know now until u let him know .....wow i enjoyed this drop!
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think he knows by now...

    Thank you all for the read and the love that comes with it.


    I appreciate it... BIGTIME!


    MaddSistahlyLoveAlways!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    you not only painted a picture with this scribe, you also gave it texture. I felt this.... Awesome

    "every
    noun and then
    he blends adjectives in
    that stream in my eardrums
    create serenading notes that
    undeniably woo me"​


    Shilom
     
  8. LindaChavis

    LindaChavis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Niceeeeeeee

    Love it !!
     
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    Thats whats up sister THATS whats up :read:

    I love me some of my poetic sister Coco :read:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes i think HE does too

    great tribute to the fact
     
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