Black Poetry : He Cried For Me

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  1. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as i rest my head on
    his big strong, but
    gentle lap, i find
    traces of salted
    teardrops from his
    warm beautiful
    hazel eyes
    it is that night that
    i realized that...he
    cried for me
    he cried for me softly
    i nuzzled in the
    strength of his heart
    because i knew
    that...he cried for me
    he cried for me softly
    i laid in the domicile
    of his big strong
    welcomed arms as
    he wept and ran his
    fingers through
    my wavy locks of
    brown hair
    it is that night that
    he re-discovered
    how much he really,
    truly loved me with
    everything that he
    could possibly
    possess inside of
    him...and oh, how
    he cried
    i heard him thank the
    Father for blessing
    him with such a
    beautiful gift...a gift
    of true love to give
    to me and once
    more, i cried for him
    because after all
    these years, i too,
    had been blessed
    we embraced each
    other tightly as we
    felt our love energy
    waterfall and
    still...he cried for me
    he cried for me softly


    ~~~listeriztrulyscribinfau~~~

    kaslis (c) 2002...all rights reserved.
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    KL.


    aight! aight! i have to admit dear sweet
    sistah-friend... it was well worth the wait!! :)
    kinda reminds me of that old school joynt
    by the O'Jays... you know the one 'bout him
    & his woman cryin' togetha!?? :D

    thank you for sharin' your soul (& his) with me!
    ...this is love! (& i would know!! LOL :wink: )

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    he cried / she cried

    they cried together......dis was tyght loved reading
    stuff like dis here ....u go gurl!:kiss: :heart: ;)
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, lol, lol...was it, worth tha wait? yeah, now that you mentioned that, it reminds me of the o'jays song, too. when i wrote this piece i happened to be listening to ja rule and lil' mos' song. as always sweet sunshyne, i a.pree.she.ate your support. smiles to you, ma dear friend. and yes, (lol)...u would kno. thanx fo readin' me. whew...now, if u would xcuse me, i think i'll go rest ma head. i think that took all i had left out of me. xcuse me...lol.
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lis...

    I love it when Queens such as yourself have that love vision...

    Very nice piece of love peace here!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    Beautiful! Simply beautiful.
     
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    I'm wit all the others. This my sistah, is tranquil beautiful.
    Keep comin' with em'.

    Much respect...Joyce
     
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    :cry:

    sorry i couldn't hold it any longer.. .
    o.k i can speak now.
    this was beautiful :D
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ma royal richness, geeq-man, be, joyce, and j'hiah...i thank all of you for jus readin' me. i'm glad that this piece was enjoyable to all of you.
     
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    yes, this is beautiful.... and beyond....

    thank you Lister, my Perfectly Poetic Sister!

    a
     
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