Black Poetry : HE CAUGHT ME

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CATCH ME

    CATCH ME DREAMING
    STREAMING IN A WELL OF THOUGHTS

    MY MIND RUNS LIKE THE RIVER…
    THOUGHTS OF THE PAST MAKE ME QUIVER
    THEN SMILE FOR I SEE SUNSHINE
    DOWN MY TIMELIJNE OF THOUGHTS…
    I GOT CAUGHT…
    LIVING LIFE... TO THE FULLEST…
    BUT NOT THROUGH GODS EYES…

    SLOW DOWN HE SAID!
    THROUGH MANY ANGELS…
    FOR MANY DAYS…
    I PRAYED THAT HE WOULD SHOW ME THE WAY.
    BUT I COULDN’T LET GO.
    SO I WOULDN’T EVEN KNOW…
    WHICH WAY TO GO…
    HE TOLD ME THAT HE WOULD BE MY GUIDING FORCE..
    MADE THE CHOICE TO LIVE…
    LIVE FOR HIM…
    LIVE FOR ME..
    BE ALL I CAN BE… CHRISTIANLY…
    SO I KEEP ASKING…
    AS I KEEP BASKING…
    IN HIS SUNRAYS…
    HELP ME…
    FOLLOW THEE….
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    HEY GIRL HOW YOU DOING!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!

    glad to see you back:hi:

    yea it's hard to stay focus when all around you is lack of focus

    or focus on the negative:?:

    good to see you holding fort

    hope to speak to you soon

    peace :terrific:

    just keep treating "you" good

    and don't have people around you bringing you down
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ask and you will receive...

    If the way is, indeed, what you seek…HE will take your hand and guide you along the path…through the shadows…and lighten the dark alleyways to show you what he saved you from.

    Continue your journey
     
  4. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Our poetry often reflects our desires, our hopes and our dreams...just as your does. Your passion shines through!
     
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    is this throw-back destee weekend up in dis mug??!!?...lol
    it's great reading ur stuff again sister...
    i hope u drop more up in dis piece...

    one love
    khasm
     
  6. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PEACE AND UNDERSTANDING SURROUNDS ME...
    THANKS...
    EVERYONE!!!
    IT FEELS GOOD TO BE BACK...

    WISDOM IS THE KEY TO UNDERSTANDING...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey hey nice to see ole faces and sweet ink flowin up in the house this was phat sis.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A blessing to actually learn from mistakes and continue to make positive moves forward. God smiles upon you poetess.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Surrendering to HIM...

    isn’t our most difficult achievement… it is keeping a burning desire to,

    “BE ALL I CAN BE… CHRISTIANLY…"

    and

    "I KEEP ASKING…
    AS I KEEP BASKING…
    IN HIS SUNRAYS…
    HELP ME…
    FOLLOW THEE”

    Those lines speak volume and are very encouraging.
    Praying to keep ourselves in check, so we can be
    all we can be… “CHRISTIANLY…” What a wonderful difference
    it would make in our world. Great write!

    Its very nice to read you again, sister friend.

    Be blessed!
    Coco
     
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    Caught Up in the shadow of God's love is a Great place to be.

    I applaud you!
     
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