Quiet Poetry Lounge : He Came To Me In A Dream

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Apr 3, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Will it happen will I ever be with my dream
    I was asleep,but I felt the hands the mouth the heat
    so sweet
    The tongue as it slithered down my body
    In the darkness I hear a whisper saying baby wake up
    My eyes are too heavy to lift
    My body too weak
    He came to me in a dream
    Resting my head on him right where his neck and shoulder meet
    thump,thump,thump
    that's his heart beat
    I slow my breathing and just listen
    It seems as if one person is breathing
    I can feel him his body his heat
    I heard his voice I know what he taste like and from kissing him I know what I taste like
    Why isn't he here now
    Why do my dreams forsake me
    Have me reaching out for him in the morning and the sun sings across my face
    Sit up and ask where did you go as if he were there right with me
    Look around check the mirror and see it's only me
    If you never tell a dream it will come true?
    Well I wish it could I really do.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done lovin da flow
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you a lot
     
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    indeed dreams come true and become reality
    most welcome
     
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    nice flowing
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    thank you both :hot:
     
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    SWEET!! That was nice!!!


     
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