Black Poetry : He Ain't Got Time (Haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Sep 28, 2001.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm in a hurry.
    I ain't got time to love you.
    Pull your panties down.











    From the *I Haiku You* series.
    Copyright 2001 © by Joyce Rogers
     
  2. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce,

    So many brother's and sister's
    feel like they dont have time.
    Just a slap back into reality.:eek:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES INDEED JOYCE

    TOO MANY SO FEW
    TYMELESS TALES
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce

    have I told you lately I love how you Haiku????? Well I do sis.





    One
     
  5. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you...

    thank you for that MUCH needed laugh, haven't done to much of that

    ...this haiku is tight... and so true on a real note....


    Blk Kween
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i too am loving
    the way you Haiku

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is soo tight and precise!!!

    love what u do!!!

    *tight-panties*

    :toast:
     
  8. SAARONCROWELL

    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOOOOOHHHHHHH.....

    NEVER HAD A HUNCH
    ..SUCH VERBIAGE
    COULD GET MY DRAWLS ABUNCHED!:D


    THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE LESSON IN NON-EXPEDIENCY!!!!
     
  9. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce

    sista, oh how you DO Haiku!
    Love this succinct message with such a powerful visual! Such a powerful EMOTIONAL! (reality baby, ree-al-i-tee!)

    stroke the keys!

    a
     
  10. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you give

    the art of writing Haiku a new meaning...
    a lot said in three lines..

    K
     
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