Black Poetry : HAZEL EYES

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  1. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hazel eyes, I see you
    Looking at me so deeply,
    So lovingly
    For you have taken me
    By surprise, dear love
    I want you explicitly!
    As I see you gazing at me
    Do you see me gasping for
    Air?
    I see you still gazing at
    Me...I can hardly breathe
    Put me out of my misery
    So that I won't have to
    Die for you
    Put me out of my misery
    So that I won't have to
    Reside in you
    Put me out of my misery
    So that I won't have to
    Cry for you
    Hazel eyes, I see you
    Looking at me....
    Can you see through me?
    Can you see my heart beat?
    Can you read the tunes that
    My heart plays for you?
    Can you read the words
    Of love that my heart
    Whispers to you?
    Can you see what you are
    Doing to me?
    Hazel eyes, I see you
    Looking at me....
    I feel the warmth of you
    Dwelling in my soul
    I feel the warmth of your
    Touch in your eyes
    I feel you inside of me
    I feel you hypnotizing me
    I feel you enticing me
    I feel you tantalizing me
    I feel you enthralled in me
    Hazel eyes, can you see
    What I see?
    Can you see the desire in me?
    Can you see me wanting to
    Hold you?
    Can you see me wanting to
    Be near you?
    Can you see me wanting to
    Feel you next to me?
    Can you see how my heart
    wants to roam free with you?
    Hazel eyes, I see you
    Looking at me....

    ~listeristrulyscribin'foryou~

    kaslis, copyright 2001...all rights reserved.
     
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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    LISTERSCRIBIN' ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    Such a Beautiful Scribe!!

    Welcome to this side of town
    please know that you're at home!!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DESTEE, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU! NOW, I CAN EXHALE, WHEWWW...HOME SWEET HOME. YES, I'M HERE. I THINK I'LL SIT DOWN AND SCRIBE AWHILE. IT'S GOOD TO BE HOME.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHERYKAH, THANK YOU, DEAR FRIEND...I SEE WHERE YOU'VE BEEN KEEPING YOURSELF THESE DAYS. I'M GLAD TO SEE YOU HERE AND THANK YOU FOR THE READ.
     
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    Very nice eyes Lister,

    Enjoyed this read!

    L&R (Love&Respect)
    GQ
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LISTERRRRR!!!

    i am so glad to see you!!
    welcome... welcome... welcome

    this piece... well you know!
    those Hazel Eyes are
    still just as hypnotizing the
    2nd time around!! ;)

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    A NEW SET OF HAZEL EYES HAS INSPIRED ME TO REPOST....
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LISTER....

    now you KNOW that dis is MY POEM!! :)

    i love this piece/peace... thank you for allowing
    me the chance to read it again&again&again...

    AlwaysLove...
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SUCH BEAUTY I SEE IN YO EYEZ
    GLAD YA HOME I FEEL U ROAM THE SOUL
    AND LOVIN YA BIG TYME
    BEAUTIFUL WORK OF ART.......
     
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    My dear sis...

    ...you know, I am lovin' these hazel eyes here. *Wishin' for a 'pair' of my own*; keep doin' what you're doin, sis...:roll::spin:
     
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