Quiet Poetry Lounge : Having Fun the Hard Way

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Apr 16, 2008.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    will i ever be her main feature

    instead of her main creature?

    cut!!!!!!!!!!

    Howard, how many times do I have to tell you it’s “preacher”

    main preacher

    gotcha

    okay let’s start with the second line

    [Howard continues]

    will my luxury train ever reach her …..

    [meanwhile ten miles outside of town]

    how did I get talked into this wedding gown

    [looks down at her watch]

    a quarter to nine

    it’ll be fine

    i’ll just walk up to Howard and ……

    [Eve spots a detour sign]

    construction worker :

    hey lady watch it

    eve :

    sorry guys

    construction worker :

    man, she was flying

    did you see her eyes?

    [eve sighing]

    i shouldn’t have broken off all ties

    [Knoxville, 5 miles]

    okay, I’m making good time

    i’m going to love him this time

    i promise



    love,

    eve
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one made me smile, I enjoyed the humor you...well, Eve... blended into this piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u doing it up again i like how u mixed it up here on a fun level
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $$rich$$

    thanks watzinaname
     
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