Black Poetry : Have You Noticed Me?

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've noticed
    the beauty of your
    pear-shaped derriere
    no matter what type
    clothing you wear

    i've noticed
    the rise and fall of your beautiful breasts
    with each expansion and contraction
    of your bountiful chest

    you take a breath, gurl

    i've noticed
    the hang of your hair as it frames your face
    with eyes that dims the sunshine

    ****, i wish you were mine

    i've noticed
    the curve at the corners of your full, luscious lips
    your tapered waist-line and the flare of your hips
    your smile lights up any room you enter
    you're fast becoming
    my world...my center

    all this contained in your
    cocoa enriched hue

    YES...

    i've noticed you.
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep!!

    Dis one here flamin:hot:
     
  3. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a poem about me...how sweet! ....i'm kidding, but i really do luv the flow!


    flattered in my own mind,
    dee:kiss:
     
  4. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TRUST ME, ladies...

    you're ALL noticed...always. you can be in the middle of the projects, living in a house that's falling on one side, and all the windows out. once you step out onto the porch...you're noticed. that's the power you hold.:)

    THANKS for the love, y'all.
     
  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller

    Hella Hot Joynt dog!!!

    Reas
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS Reas...but this is the tame version...didn't wanna get explicit and ****.:)

    let the river flow.
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    women are truly amazing creatures
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let the house say...

    AMEN.
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayuum dawg....

    I noticed her too!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  10. poeticdelight

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    yes,

    i noticed you lying in the moonlight
    feeling the brusk air surrounding
    you

    pounding like the waves of the
    ocean its secret potion of emotion
    insolvent lotion

    silky smooth

    like poetry in motion

    :)

    tight one ballerman

    keep it coming
     
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