Black Poetry : Have you ever...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by story, Jul 31, 2002.

  1. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have you ever,

    Watched the sunset from a mountaintop
    Or just listen to the background of birdsongs
    Ever smelled the sweetness of honeyscuckle...

    Have you ever,

    Loved another human being so much
    You would lay down and di for them...
    Ever looked into a person's iii's and thought it resembled the sunset...
    Ever jus listened to that person as if their voice was a song in itself
    Ever smelled that person's fragrance, and thought it to be sweeter than all the spices in the world...

    Have you ever,
    Experienced a Natural love...

    (c)2001
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have never

    read anything as sweet :)
    Natasha
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis kinda love i seek within
    da love of a kind friend
    as beautiful as dis be
    ya wordz come sweet to me
    in da air i fly )))))>>>>>>>>$$R
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes...i agree with nat. very nice, story. i am really diggin' yo pieces!
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now you've gotten me into you with this one.

    whoa!

    this one's...indescribably nice.
     
  6. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Story

    You got everybody out hea diggin ya style! lol Keep it comin dog, it's tight!

    Reas
     
  7. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOl....thanks y'all...
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes i have experienced such love and i see you enjoy nature as much as I and j'hiah...well, i am honored to have read such craft...

    i look forward to more...
     
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