Quiet Poetry Lounge : Have You Ever

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Versatile, Mar 20, 2005.

  1. Versatile

    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have You Ever

    I want to know
    Have you ever loved someone
    So deeply without the labels
    Labels meaning he or she doesn’t have to be
    A friend, a partner, a lover, a soul mate
    Get my drift
    Imagine what it would be like
    To just pick a person
    You’ve never seen, you’ve never touched
    Well maybe not in the physical
    But they can touch your heart
    Just by the sound of their voice
    You’ve never made love to their sexual principle
    But you have with their mind
    Conversation’s so good
    You find yourself up at bizarre hours in the morning
    Enveloped in their thoughts
    Wanting to be apart of their dreams, your
    So deep into a parallel world
    That it hasn’t even occurred to you
    That you have yet to meet this person
    But looks mean nothing at the time
    Because they have everything
    You’ve been looking for
    Something that you have a hard time finding
    Because he or she is intellectually stimulating
    Touching topics that you would never discuss with just anyone
    Your deepest thoughts are revealed and
    You never realized how naked you’ve become
    Because you’ve said things that will make you vulnerable
    Things that you refuse to take back
    Because you feel a sense of trust
    In this being that intrigues you so
    So you decide to finally meet after hours of exchanging words
    To discover he or she isn’t what you anticipated in the physical
    Because you were so caught up
    With the person underneath the skin
    Cause at the time looks weren’t an important factor to you
    Because this person makes you feel so alive
    Takes you out of that box
    That you keep yourself locked up in
    Freeing you mentally, emotionally, and spiritually
    A combination that’s so hard to find with good looks in the package
    So you speak to see if there is a familiar voice to this face
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com quiet flowz
    welcome from above as i bless this some love
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    this was mad tyte and smoothly done flow on
    look to read more of you and feel the love u share :number1:
    :dance: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To meet such a one, one who has appealed to that which is the most important, that inner beauty felt within. Wonderful flow. Welcome to destee, look forward to reading more from you.
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very articulate in every single feeling and step for the scenario that you made, and it was a beautiful vision of love.


    Tyte Drop... :welldone:
     
  5. Versatile

    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its just me

    Thank you for your input, i was afraid i wouldn't get a response...Thanx
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Can't wait to read more. :cool:
     
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    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) Nice..felt the warmth of this..aahhhh
     
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