Black Poetry : Have YOU Ever.......

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have you ever…..
    seen the souls of two dance
    upon the love they have found
    within the journey…..

    In the rain drops of life
    Love comes and goes
    And no one to hold
    In the middle of your life
    You share
    You love
    You care
    You bond
    You trust
    And grow
    the yearning goes……….
    To want
    And then you begin to wake
    And the feeling have faded
    Hurting so deep…
    All you do is weep
    Not knowing how to
    deal with the aches
    just know your dream is gone

    Have you ever…………….
    Notice
    It came so sweet and leaves
    A bitter taste in
    your in your soul
    It stings the heart
    As the spirit drifts off
    Into the everlasting
    pain from the
    Love of another….
    Sinks in a darken hole
    And they never know
    What you truly feel
    But claims……..
    to understand….
    How
    When you made them of you
    and you was of them

    Have you ever……….
    Loved someone
    so much it just hurts
    And the world just wont
    act right…
    looking upon the skies and
    knew it was right
    but it fades….
    As the clouds float a different way
    And all you do is wonder WHY
    YOU
    When the nights was
    warm with them afar
    But now cold…..

    Have you ever…..
    Felt so empty that your love
    Begins to burn inside
    And that yearning of desire
    Just dies….

    Have you ever….
    Not wanting to love
    Not caring
    Just drifting away….
    inside a world of gray and mist
    not feeling at all

    Have you ever…..
    seen the souls of two dance
    upon the love they have found
    within the journey…..
    from beginning to end…..
    Do you really know what
    you have done
    to anothers heart
    and soul....

    Have you ever......
    thought about it?

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I know all this so well
    I have been on this road
    and i've taste the bittersweet
    i've felt the crossing of da bow
    i know the mindful runs
    yes i have and felt it all before
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its sad that the journey…..
    sometimes end like that...
    i know of this feeling as well
    thanks for your comment and
    support Rich on dis
    Peace
    unto you
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime what seem to be is only a myth
    and what one seeks is not always what they get
    see i know coz i been to the undertaker of it all
    not just once nor twice but many times now i
    found light & feelings of free will so i stay in it like
    it's all mines it's sad it ends like a ride not a journey
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    within the myth is the dream
    that fades..the light only comes
    if you believe.....stay in it like
    it's all yours....
    i feel what ya saying
     
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    tytely posed question...
    those who want to know...know
    one love
    khasm
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed
    thanks for the love on dis
    peace
    Angel
     
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    Yes I have!
    But then I
    Realized it just
    was not meant
    to be. That's
    when the hurt
    went away.
    Nice drop!
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhhh
    The refreshment of good poetry
    You never cease to amaze!
    The flow of questions(almost rhetorical to one like me)
    Indeed refreshes and stimulates the mind.....
    Keep doing ya thang sis
    It's all love between us!


    PEACE AND LOVE
    TWISION
     
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    This is a ride that many have taken, the ride can be bumpy, and the destination, unclear. This flowed deeply.
     
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