Black Poetry : Have You Ever

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HAVE U EVER BEEN IN LOVE....

    MY HEART OCCASIONALLY STOPS BEATING
    MY MIND HAS TOTALLY BEEN ABDUCTED
    MY THOUGHTS TRAVEL SO FAR, BUT MY TONGUE WONT SEEM TO SPEAK THE WORDS
    IVE CHANGED MY WHOLE LIFE, IM NOT THE PERSON I USED TO BE

    HAVE U EVER BEEN LOVE...

    I BARELY GO OUT, ID RATHER SIT AT HOME
    I THREW AWAY THE NUMBERS FROM OLD FLAMES
    I MET A COUPLE OF PEOPLE, BUT NONE OF THEM AMOUNT TO YOU
    I FANTASIZE ABOUT THE FUTURE AND DAYDREAM ABOUT THE PAST

    HAVE U EVER BEEN IN LOVE...

    I WANT TO PICK UP THE PHONE, BUT MY FINGERS WONT DIAL UR NUMBER
    I STAY UP HALF THE NIGHT CUZ THE THOUGHT OF U WONT LET ME REST
    UR NAME PUMPS THRU MY BRAIN, BUT I DONT WANT TO THINK ABOUT U AT ALL
    I JUST WANNA HIDE THIS HEART, PUT IT BACK IN THOSE CHAINS

    HAVE U EVER BEEN IN LOVE...

    MY EMOTIONS CHANGE FREQUENTLY, IM MAD ONE DAY N THE NEXT IM MADLY IN LOVE WITH YOU
    I DONT KNOW WHAT YOU FEEL ANYMORE, ITS HARD TO EXAMINE
    I WISH YOU COULD JUST HOLD ME, LOVE ME, TELL ME U NEED ME, SHOW ME, BE WITH ME

    HAVE U EVER BEEN IN LOVE...

    WITH SOMEONE WHO STOPPED LOVING YOU...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling you on this...love a powerful emotion of madness and joy..nice flow
    :rolling:
     
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    Hi,

    This is a brilliantly expressed piece!!

    We all have been there. We must let go and move on. It's the only way to learn to love again.

    Thanks for this one!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Bluewater and Sierra
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep ..i have been
    know tha feelin..
    Poeticlyspeakin...
    i feld this...
    keep writing love youre
    flow..
    much love liberty
     
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    verse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** i hate it when i can relate to stuff like this...nice flow. the words came alive.
     
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    Wow, such truth...about being in love, it's powerful but with time it fades and "heals". Thanks goodness for time. Felt ur flow.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u, im glad u can feel me, but then again im not, cuz it sucks when u go thru sumthin like this. but thank u for readin n replyin. much love...
     
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