Black Poetry : HAVE U EVER

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  1. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IN THOUGHTS ~~~~~~

    Have u ever loved someone
    u never seen or even thought
    how it could be
    have u ever reached out with
    arms closed
    have u ever tried to say it with words
    and couldn't speak
    have u ever turn away becoz
    yo feelin' became deeper then
    the game of love itself
    have u ever been mastered to a passion
    for the whispers u hear
    have u ever felt so bad in the comfort
    zone yet alone
    within self of love my heart boils
    and if she only knew the real me
    then she could see the love of thee
    have u ever been love stuck
    and cant find the right way to turn
    have u slept in the thoughts of whats
    a myth of lost vision to love the essence
    of one's beings in the corner of yo mind
    have u ever known how i feel and the deal
    of whats reality and a dream

    silent screams in yo dreams is of love
    that burns within and set a fire not
    even water can put out have u?
    my heart is real
    my soul is whole
    my mind is u
    have u ever been taken into a place
    of no return and set out to dry
    by the beckon of love that never was
    have u ?
    yet u find self still in love
    like a secret of helpless bliss
    i remembered the first time
    the in betweens and the last
    time is it that i may be spellbound
    dip into the wish i continue in notions
    well have u ever............................?
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    yes ... thanks to this beautiful peace
    i'm smiling and doing that now

    Lovely Flow PoeticMaster

    Thanks for letting me ...

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    destee u r one of a kind
    in soul/heart and mind
    and that makes me smile
    have u ever known how i care
    thank u Queen
     
  4. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes!!!!
    have i ever wanted it
    and couldn't get it
    have i ever felt passion
    and he was cold as ice
    have i need it
    and he said no!
    well yessssss! and a beautiful flow
     
  5. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uh yes i have

    great piece MASTER, your throne is unscathed
     
  6. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been there.......
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PM (my Nubian Kang)...

    yes... yes... & yes!!
    i can relate & i am feelin'
    your flow on this piece...
    it is fantastic!! & i
    wouldn't say it if i didn't
    mean it!! ;)

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  8. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I 2nd GA on this.......
    Definetely feelin this.....

    8th!!
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PM,

    Outstanding thoughts here!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'VE BEEN HERE SO MANY TIMES
    NOW I FLY OPENLY FREELY
    I FEEL YA BIG TIME....FLOW ON>>>>
     
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