Black Poetry : Have U ever?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Lloyd, May 31, 2004.

  1. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once I was wandering
    About how I was living
    Having no real friends
    Everything was nonsence
    No one to soothe me when I was in pain
    Nobody with who I could've share when something I gain
    I was asking God why
    He didn't allow me to die
    So silently I was crying
    My soul was shouting
    I heard someone knocking
    It was U
    U've brought me to another world just with a one kiss
    U've wash away my tears only with one world full of peace
    Now for sure I know
    The rain can fall or the snow
    I'm no more a broken heart
    Together forever whe are
    Ô I won't forget this day
    When U take my pain away
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi:wave:
    and Welcome, this is a lovely poem
    of inspiration
    please do share more
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very warm and inspirational poem
    likes...welcome aboard....
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That would be a moment to remember for sure, very nice. Hope you are enjoying yourself here at destees.
     
  5. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww this was a sweet well put poem showing your gratitude for that one kiss and one day.
    flow on poet :wink:
     
  6. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank U!!!

    It's so sweet and tender here! :blush: For sure I appreciate!I'll share something again with U soon!But b/4 that...take care of Urselves!
    Peace
    Lloyd
     
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    Tis so...sweet
    when you finally meet
    that special someone
    that makes your heart
    and soul complete...

    Ah...yes, loved the you crafted
    the art of love...here

    Nice work!
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lloyd,
    Nice write.
    Thanks for the U's that bring with them such healing.
    The U-niversals
    That help us to see
    Our real worth
    And stay and share it with us.

    Peace and Blessings
     
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