Black Poetry : Have U Been Thinking?

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  1. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (For the one on Rosecrans and that B street =) my 1st crush)

    Did u
    Will u
    Or have u been thinking of me
    Like I’ve been thinking of you?

    See, I ran across your face
    And it reminded me of the days when I longed to be read
    And scripted by you
    Reminds me of the minutes I’d use to talk to you
    And just as I begin to pick up the phone to call you,
    Something stops me right in my shoes
    And reminds me that u have a new woman on your mind
    A new woman who gets all of your time
    And a new woman whose there to work you like a nine-to-five

    Did u
    Will u
    Or have u been thinking of me
    Like I’ve been thinking of you?

    One day later I still sit looking at a screen
    Mesmerized by what the time has done for you
    Chocolate smooth
    Has a girl and it ain’t me
    But I don’t care cause
    We were just meant to be
    And I know I am wrong for lusting another woman’s man
    But he was mine in 4th grade
    When we would constantly giggle about holding hands
    He was mine in 5th grade
    When I’d sneak over his house after school to do “homework” and
    He was mine in 6th grade when he said he liked me,
    And I just laughed and said, “yeah, right and…”
    He was mine in 7th grade when I’d call him just to listen to his voice
    Singing melodies in my head
    And drowning in sex driven thoughts of he and I
    I know it’s wrong to lust after another woman’s man
    But I am truly in lust with this man
    Beauty does not speak’eth of he
    For he is in his own category-sensuality
    He is my fire within a cold storm

    Still I am left here to think of what could’ve or might’ve been
    And not is
    One day I shall tell him that
    In fourth, fifth and even ‘till now….all I’ve ever wanted was you
    And I know that all you’ve ever dreamed of was me
    So when this woman packs her bags and wishes u well
    I will be the one to shut the door behind her
    Yeah, sounds bad but hey…it’s true
    And I know that I shall always do unto others what I’d want them to do unto you
    But you are on my mind and I can’t think 2 clearly
    And just remember that
    I have done nothing, and will never do more than I am suppose to
    I’ll continue not to call you and if we just so happen to meet on the street
    And you remember me
    And I remember you
    Then I will ask the questions I’ve longed to be answered …

    Did u
    Will u
    Or have u been thinking of me
    Like I’ve been thinking of you?

    With a glare into his eyes I can read the words left in his heart for so long…

    ---MzPoetic 11· 24·o5
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this drifted into the memory lane of yesteryears
    very nicely done
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahh what an heartfelt poem flow on my sista.:book:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes it's like that sometimes, wondering about what might have been, and wondering if they ever wonder too. Enjoyed this scribe.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is what it is
    This from the heart
    Awesome drop poet
     
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    Hi mzpoetic8705
    I just enjoy how you place to canvas
    those past thoughts of one from the past
    who seeps into our thoughts now and then
    Very cool drop :)

    Peace
     
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