Black Poetry : have my child.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Jun 18, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    name one sin we haven't committed...
    remember the park?? that spot where we did it
    i just didn't "hit it" i made eternal vows with it and sealed them with a kiss
    i admit it i did use a little game to get it but i don't want that fame and glory
    for once in life i love this story...

    i use to spend nights with you discuss your issues
    " lemme get you some tissue"
    never dissed you calling you out of your name
    for i feared the queen whose eyes pierced the king
    you read me
    you lead me with assurance that there is virtuosity
    circling you at high velocities

    and now....

    i'm tired of girls, i want a woman
    one of strength
    virtuous length
    one who has heard me repent for sins of the flesh
    and that woman is you

    and now...

    i realize that this "in love" thing has never been my style
    until now
    i want this to last a while meaning nfinitely
    will you marry me??
    (some time in the future :D)

    have my child
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    you have beautiful talent

    i missed your other piece "prayer" due
    to some computer problem-O's

    yes, i said computer problem-O's :lol:

    love you :kiss:

    pd :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyght as hell .......dis be off the hook !!
    be all ya wanna be
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I truly enjoyed this sweet piece.
    The last verse was live!


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN:heart:
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was fun and freestyle for me (blended with a dose of reality :D)

    peace and thanx poet(esses)
     
  6. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do yo thang Poet!!

    This here is tyte!! U know I feel ya on this fo sho Bro!!:toast:
     
  7. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm tired of girls-want a woman..
    I feel ya on that cuz.

    JAH Love.
     
  8. epiphany

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    Beautifully done J'hiah..


    Epiphany :heart:
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lil brother bighead.


    ...this was pure sweet-ness!! & i don't know
    why i'm smilin' so big... :D ...but it might have
    something to do with the fact that i am always
    impressed by your talent! :wink:

    thanks for sharing.

    itsallLove, chile! (nfinite-ly)

    elayne.
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah

    ummm hummm good like morning coffee. love the flow of this here. "i'm tired of girls, i want a woman"






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