Black Poetry : Have i .............?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Oct 6, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Never have i had feld music so deep..
    Never have i had such a beautifull dream...
    Never have i had jumped up so high when i heard youre name falling or smilled when i heard it in a song movie or saw it in a book or steets....
    Never have i been inspired to sing and express write a song or poem that much..
    Never had i had feld before that i was not alone...
    in this world ....
    Never have i been captured by someones Presance Far....
    Never have i had longed for someone that deep before...

    I have never see you real..
    i have never watched you from a distance...
    I have never touched youre face...
    or hold youre hand...
    heard you laugh .... (cause trough the speakers it was brom brom)

    Now....


    i may never ....

    or may ever...


    Maybe in the future i will have that feeling again......



    and maybe even more......



    with another man....





    but before.....




    no .......



    never have ...



    i ....
     
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    Keep writing... your thought captivates me. :tweety:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    took me under once again by the devotion of ya flow
    let the ink run sistah Queen
     
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    very smooth scribe enjoyed it as always....
     
  5. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Lovin this poem. Very deep. Strong emotions. Feeling this. :heart: