Black Poetry : have i told you i love you? (is response to queentswana's relay)

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have I told you I love you?
    Let me explain why,
    one word couldn’t exemplify the feelings I have inside.
    One phrase couldn’t explain to you why deep inside I cry,
    and it’s hard to convey this side of me when my pride keeps my eyes dry.
    I’m sure I could tell you “I love you” but honestly it’d be a lie,
    because the level of emotion I have for you is greater then that word defines.
    So I’ll bottle it up and lock it away within my heart’s confines,
    until that day I find the words to say, what’s hidden between those lines
    of manuscript that were never writ, only confined to dwell within me,
    in that boundary that’s surrounding me,
    and I’d tell you these words resoundingly,
    if there’s ever a way more profound then these,
    but there’s not, so I fear I’ll never find release.
    The reason I’ll never use these three,
    is because I refuse to give you any less then me,
    and I consider my words to be the best of me.


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    © Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one love flowing from a solo heart this was tyte
    flow head
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes it's hard to express what means so much. But somehow, we do find the words when they burn deeply enough. Your pen is on fire yet again. Bravo poet.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesomely posed poet
     
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    Beautiful...
    Absolutely Beautiful!
     
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