Black Poetry : have i been gone that long?

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    have i been away so long
    that your eyes stopped roaming
    and your heart began to
    leap at the sights before you

    have i?

    have the milk sour'd
    where the richness of your love
    once flowed
    abundantly

    is it gone

    have the oceans of gentleness
    you once bestowed upon me
    dried up so easily

    where's the cup of your loveliness
    i've drank so much from

    have you given it away?

    have i been away so long
    that your body no longer responds
    to the taste of my touch

    do you know how much i missed you?

    do the springs of your fountains
    that once sprang forth...eternal
    now have limitations that negates
    the levitation of your heartstrings
    that rose so high

    {just the other day}

    wasn't it yesterday when just my presence
    was enough to lessen any discomfort that arose
    on the shores of your existence

    forgive me for neglecting
    heart-built monuments i left erected
    thinking that forever meant just that...FOREVER

    clever

    how time and absence
    wipe away heart felt messages of
    I LOVE YOU
    even if it's true.

    did the blue skies turn gray so fast
    that the overcast told you that love couldn't last
    through the good AND BAD ways
    of this...this tomorrow day

    did your forget the commitment we made
    on that day we called
    THE FIRST DAY OF THE REST OF OUR LIVES
    when we became one
    me...your husband
    you...my wife

    DID YOU DO THIS THING FOR ME?

    was there a time limit on loyalty
    and all the good things we wanted to do
    that prevented you from waiting for me

    did the choochie scream
    I NEED RELEASE
    'til you went out and....

    {wait lines and hate crimes
    have been committed for less}

    was i gone so long that your need for wrong exceeded right
    and last night forced you to face your circumstance
    with indescretion

    i'm only guessing, but

    did your horniness get the best of you
    as your loneliness progressed into a physical need
    that manifested itself in and between
    the confines of your LEGS

    is that the gist of it?

    have i been away too long to right the wrongs
    committed by NEED AND NEGLECT
    that you elected to...

    tell me

    HAVE I BEEN GONE THAT LONG?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmm!! baller

    mn ya well felt here coz i'veseen dis too many tymes
    often she jut get lost in the myth of lust forgetting da
    trust in the heart to con deem da secert part between
    dem legs .........tyght **** man!:eek:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller

    Hella Tyght!!!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...Reas...rykah...

    THANKS for feeling this PEACE...sometimes life takes us to a place where the in's and out's of things are turned upside down and you feel a NEED to walk away.:(

    {but not today:)}
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller,

    deep bruh. mad tight.

    blak
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb...

    THANKS for reading me, blak man.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller,

    questions, wondering, relationships at times can be overwhelming.

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes....

    we allow immediate needs--needs of the flesh--to over rule reason...appearing that we're selfish and unfeeling...when, really, we got lost in the moment.

    THANKS FOR READING ME.:)
     
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