Black Poetry : hating you too

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  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you answer my thought provoking questions
    in nods and grunts i can barely decipher
    making me feel like a pain in the ***
    instead of your woman and our sons' mother

    yesterday i kept track of our conversations
    7 minutes including time spent discussing our son
    7 weeks until the birth of our second child
    diagnosed with anemia and a gallbladder condition
    telling me I use it as an excuse
    that the house is a mess
    and this isn't what you want
    well, surprise, me neither
    i wanted a husband, a family and a home
    i got you, nearly two out of wedlock and
    a house i can't even call my own
    you tell me you were joking when you said
    you wanted to move out
    ****, i want you to move out too
    i did better alone
    no grown man to worry about
    no shouting match
    no threat of violence
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Heavy deep hard hitting words collabing.....feeling yo pain
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This saddens me, when a relationship gets so out of control. You conveyed this pain very well poetess.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :getout: it's like that??

    hopefully you two can make time to know and love on each other again...
    'sall it takes..

    the world could feel this one,
    jh.
     
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