Black Poetry : hatin cuz i'm skatin

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hatin Cuz I’m Skatin
    ****** want to kick me when I’m down, mind depressed
    I guess they hate to see a talent they ain’t got, be a success
    For those, with black pride exposed, I have no regrets
    Only God can judge me, I’m blessed
    I know it hurts to see a ***** on top, big balling
    They laugh at me when I was falling, now whose calling
    Coolbreeze I take these, break these, I’m so cold it ski’s
    Trick please, hated because I’m on top of my priorities
    So much negativity, why do you spend your time hating?
    While I’m innovating, stop contemplating, you can’t control the situation
    The don poet, you better believe
    How I manipulate the English language into what you can’t conceive
    I’m whiny now, but a few days ago I was sweet
    The one you dream to meet, that will sweep you off your feet
    You a perpetrator, more or less your cynical
    I know I’m blessed to be lyrical, stop being so hypocritical
    You give me nothing but motivation, strive for excellence
    Your talking down consist of irrelevance
    Remember, the world will hate you, no matter what you possess
    Is the reason your hating me is because you can’t relate to success?


    Now dat first verse was 2k1
    It’s fall 2k4
    And the hatin resided a bit,
    Now I spit
    See verbally, spirits haunt the block I ran
    House u robbed
    I’m sick of this
    Get a job
    Playing bones in the street pavements
    I’m working under you,
    Trying to escape black man’s enslavement
    I was cocky then
    Cocky now
    It’s funny how when u get 40 inch white
    A lil chrome hubs
    i ain't even choppin up the block yet
    No slab, but i feel feminine presence in a manly set
    Cat’s don’t act right
    I see why boys left and ain’t come back
    It’s already proven in your physical form
    U worn, most u only 20- almost 30 sometin
    Don’t be alarmed
    Dat I would come back
    Dis just a update
    I know it must be biblical
    It was hate
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Well! That was definately tyte!
    I bet they're feelin it now!
    Skate oooooon!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aiming thse words like they're darts and hitting that target, keep it coming.
     
  4. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
    THAT WAS HOTT!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep hot scribing here look out now i feel da heat
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, your rhyming is off the chainz...the way you put this joint down was a masterpiece....I'm feelin' yo style....
     
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