Black Poetry : Haters!!!!( you gotta read this)

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    their everywhere,
    i watch them studying my figure,
    and they cant help but stare.
    knowing that their feeling my outfit
    which happens to fit my curves just right,
    but you know what Haters say,
    "uh uh her clothes are too tight!"

    and ME?
    i smile so nicely
    because i know they wish they had it like me,
    caramel complected,
    hair long,
    and aint nothing fake about it,
    booty thick,
    breast round and standing at attention,
    oh and did i mention.....
    i got my own dividends.

    but Haters..... their everywhere,
    just because i walk around with my head held high,
    here goes some chicken saying
    " i hope she dont think she fly!"
    i dont consider myself conceited,
    i guess you can just say i know my worth,
    and as far as i'm concerned
    in order for me to succeed,
    aint no man needed.

    but of course..... Haters their everywhere,
    all i wanna know is
    why does it bother an african american sista
    that another african american sista got her life on track?
    why they gotta hate,
    instead of having my back?

    just because i aint got kids running around,
    or a no good man tryna put me down,
    or just because i choose to extend my education,
    Haters always gotta say i think i'm better.

    when the truth is
    that i'm just trying to provide for myself,
    i dont wanna have to ask to loan money from anyone else,
    and when the day comes to be a mommy,
    i'll make sure my child has a place to lay and,
    food to eat.

    so what i got to say to them Haters.....
    is dont hate me because i choose to succeed,
    if your wanna hate,
    hate because you chose not to lead but to follow,
    and if its not too late
    look for a better tommorrow!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!!
    and they wish to be as thee
    this was sweet what a treat !
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Truly my sistah.... its all love, im glad to see that we are on the same track.. if all else fails.. imma have your back! :toast:
    ____________
    Skeee Weee...
    a.K.a 1908...
    There was Alpha and Omega..
    the beginning, the end..
     
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    Go girl i am not mad at you go ahead and do your thing there's no reason to hate you got great flow and a point.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin' u on this
    U speakin' the truth
     
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    haters be try'n to snatch cats off elevators
    diggin ditches with a shovel so that they can keep you on their level....

    this joint was pure hotness...keep flowin poet

    one love
    khasm
     
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    re: Haters

    On point and truth! :pie:
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sista my sista I live this every day, oh what a web we ring, and what is so sad about it, these are the sista's who cry black power, and wave the red black and green. Continue to teach.
     
  9. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    glad to see that you all felt my flow, thanks alot and more power to you!
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice GuttaPoet

    I like how you gave them a chance to still pull themselves to another level and a way of dealing. " If its not too late
    look for a better tommorrow!!!! "
     
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