Black Poetry : Haterade Parade!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Oct 13, 2003.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You got your winners and your losers.
    Your procrastinators and your chosers.
    You gots those that wait and those that hate, with no fame of their own they talk about those that are gone.

    Peace that passes, understanding on this here Destee landing.
    We not expecting or asking we demanding.
    Read the etiquette if you can write you can read.
    If you need someone to explain it,
    then you better believe,
    Msluciousb don't take no mess.
    And she will be the first to confess.
    she made a many a weak minded cry.

    Don't need no hating, we ain't congratulating those who have
    time to write but do it without love.
    Show your talent not your ***...
    And the test you will surely pass.
    Cause what you showing now is
    that you have no class.

    See I learned long ago, that boasting
    and bragging leaves the crowd frowning and gagging:puke:
    So scribe yo vibe but keep the haterade parade at home...we don't
    march to that beat, we might step on ya feet, heed these words cause this message I don't want to repeat!

    BJS(C)2003
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said , well pose'd
    for u my dear a single
    red rose

    bring da love is what's said
    show it as u enter da door
    flow head drop a scribe
    but believe ya gotta have
    a heart this where poetic start

    hear da words , feel da vibe
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See now this is why i love you gurl lol
    telling it straight up
    because its true
    and you know
    that i know
    that you know
    that we know
    what u talkin bout
    you can not Love the future and DISrespect the past
    thas just bein straight up and real
    you know the song gurl..."tell it like it is"
    :D
    :teach:
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love this
    feel yo vibe...
    bring da love
    no disrespect...
    dis where it starts....
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok...i had to go back and read some other things and then come read this one again...before i actually got what you were talking about! much love for this though very tight and very true...always always show love!
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice...very nice message...
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for y'all reading and responding!

    This was especially close to my heart, but I have to call it like it 'tis.
    Nuff said!

    Blessings On Y'all's House!
     
  8. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i dig dat...

    i look and see
    a hateraid cascade
    from too many
    expect'n love when it's no love you gave
    if ya stick'n around
    then get use to this side of town
    cause we do things differently here
    and in the right direction mslusciousb is try'n to steer
    if ya new
    then check out da crew
    just like the crew
    checked out you
    destee's place is da essence of love
    i thought you knew
    if you didn't know
    then check out the above flow
    peace
    khasm
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love Msluciousb

    This is a call for the real.

    " Don't fake the funk.. or your nose will grow. "
     
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