Black Poetry : HATE (warning explicit lyrics)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Mar 2, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (rape victim)
    i lifted my head
    trying to wash the sin from my bones
    oh how they shivered.....
    i wanted to hide under a rock
    my existance to disappear from everyone,
    1...
    2...
    3...
    4...
    5...
    echos hid from me,
    i was lost tainted
    unclean, violated,
    soul-dead,
    i just want to die,

    (Gurl With Low Self Esteem)
    (Just Venting)
    HOW THE **** COULD HE DO THIS TO ME?
    who do u think u are,
    am i trash?

    why me......
    WHY COULDN'T HE HAVE MADE ME
    LIKE SOMEONE ELSE DAMMIT!!!!
    WHY DID I HAVE TO BE SO UGLY?
    WHY DID I HAVE TO BE THE ONE THEY CALL IGNORANT?
    I WANT TO RISE ABOVE IT!!!
    BUT I CAN'T.....
    i just can't....
    so ya know what i say....
    **** IT ALLL!!!!!!

    (Divorcee)
    How could he leave me for some other woman?
    had a good woman, and he threw it all away....
    i loved him....
    ****!!! where is the tylonol...

    to be continued....

    (Jus Venting, considering we're all fambly here, i suppose i can post this, I'm tired yall...i needed a release....)

    peace and hair grease,
    -story

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's ok to vent , express get crap off ya chest
    release the beast within and here a hug from a friend
    ulgy be not of such beauty a Queen a treasure
    a heart a bit under weather but real faith hold one
    together so vent , release and unwined in time
    and now u shine from da drama of da deep ....vent !!!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Story...

    As women...we face many of these issues...

    Yet we always "Rise"...and yet we still "Rise"...and "Overcome"...

    Flow on sister...sometimes we need that release to help us

    defeat the struggle...feeling the depth in your words...

    Keep your head up little sister... :grouphug:
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u guys, i was just tired didn't want to do it anymore ya know, thanks for the Huggzzzz, sage, i'll see ya in sister chat tonite.....
    peace.....
    -story
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life hurts so much just to think about it sometimes, so, thank God we can write about it. flow on.
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watz....
    much love,
    -story
     
  7. ille$t poete$$

    ille$t poete$$ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    go head on n vent girl :jumping: ..im feelin this...strsesin over **** like this all tha time...go do ya thang we all need to let our emotions out now n then...hope your cloudy days soon clear up! :grouphug:
    luv,
    tha ille$t :peace:
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks illest....of course my cloudy days will clear up....for evry high there is a low....the lower the lows the higher the highs
     
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