Black Poetry : hate poem

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Nov 4, 2002.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and sometimes i feel like i hate you
    not that i really do
    but what you said or did made me so mad
    and all my feelings for you are passionate
    so i wanna say ihateyousomuch
    but because i love you with all my soul
    i won't say it
    but i think it
    but i know it's not really hate

    and sometimes i wonder why you married me
    knowing what i wanted and how i see things
    then i turn around and ask myself
    why i married you
    knowing how you think and change your mind
    and fall into the same rut and realize
    because i love you and felt that God wanted this too

    so i'm not going to complain but
    i'm not a doormat
    so look forward to some hot combat
    soldier.
     
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    at salute

    :lol:

    tight piece WF7

    keep it coming

    :toast:

    pd
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    still trying to figure this love thang out myself
    lovin your piece though
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mixed minds of twisted thought
    so we combat da sweet way
    gurl i feel ya here .....dis love thang is still unknown
    but our hearts say yes to it....tyght scribe wild7
     
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    seven.


    *whew* thank you for letting me know i'm not
    alone!! :) in otha words... i can relate to the
    feelings expressed here so tyght-ly.

    (but the love don't stop... no matter what)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  6. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comraderie (sp?) y'all...
    love is sometimes the only thing that keeps the
    relationship sane...
    peace. -7:spinstar:
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I can do is laugh...I just made 10 years on October 24th and maaaaaan, it ain't no joke! I think that God laughs at all of us sometimes, trying to make this relationship thing work, love him to death, but some days my RESERVE NERVE is getting tweaked. Nice piece.
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad you feel it shery and redlady!
    it's REAL!! :spinstar:
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man! fierce combat!! dayyyyuuummm!
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you alerady know how i write so i had to click on the title

    sounds like somebodys having a bad day !


    hope things get better at home
    good poem and hope to see you postin love poems soon

    oh and i like how you started off i once started off the poem the same way

    and sometimes i.................... i like that
     
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