Black Poetry : Hate on a Plate

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  1. MsInterpret

    MsInterpret Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooooh!!! Poetry is fun!! lol...Naw just trying to write some poetry :)

    This one was written...inspired by a recently closed thread on Destee...

    **snapping fingers**

    Hate on a Plate

    Your mind does nothing but stew
    Negative words you spew
    Cooking up words with hate
    Tongue's curses on a hot plate
    But your food's boring
    It's old
    Even the side dish is cold
    Your words are so bitter
    Look! The garnish is litter
    You're a horrible cook
    A friendly suggestion,
    a new recipe book
    Instead of using ignorance
    Try seasoning some intelligence
    Instead of pouring in all that trash
    For class use more than a dash!!!!!!
     
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    Often when such hit da plate
    a dish of self inner hate
    display of false and some fake
    alwayz not cooked but half baked
    but in unity is a well good cake
    stay within is what to make
    then if raw it's in da trash
    without a call in da flash
    no need to sprinkle or dash
    soon this all will pass

     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Real Truth!




    MsInterpret,

    Sister, you have found your niche, for real...This is off the chain contemporary stuff, Wow! As they say, "you a poet and don't know it" . Please, hurry and get your mic too! so we can hear you deliver the Word:)...and thanks for the Preface! Helps a lot!

     
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    Astrologer4U Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cute

    I like your poem MsInterpret. Your're having so much fun that I think I may write a poem or two...



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  5. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    Yes Astrologer4U,

    She knocked this one out the park:)

     
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