Black Poetry : Hate Crime

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jun 26, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If it's masterpiece theatre

    They want for lunch

    Fetch the linguini

    That dog will hunt

    Sick aristocratic,

    Hate bloodlines...

    With acrobatic ~

    Stylized,

    Driveby :driveby:

    ill hound dog points

    Which counterpoint

    Nasty petty crime,

    Stinking up the joint

    Fly in the ointment argument

    Unappealing hate crime sentiment

    Prudish... pundit detriment

    Word police suspect

    You're in check!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :sand:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    crimes , crimes ,
    tears drop from
    da open link
    hateful decite
    silently speaks
    but what's instor
    true love and much
    more
    the crime of blindness
    the word play
    love controls da place

    this makes one think !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i aint got no
    flow but as always
    1Poet
    tight drop
    feelin ya vibe
    it do make ya think
    ...Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This drop does make you think, is a hateful crime entertaining for some? Thoughts to ponder....
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the hate crime
    like a sickness it seem
    nice one here
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brave souls, without whom, truth perishes

    I thank you.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    interesting subject matter
    love the way you summed
    this up...

    Nice flow
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    always tight, please flow again!! :yo:
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep but i hear ya brother.....








    Love libertylady:heart:
     
  10. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, "Lady".
     
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