Black Poetry : Harmony

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Dec 17, 2003.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I fell in love with music,
    When I first laid eyes on you,
    When my ears fell captive to your
    Composing, transposing.
    Your creation, without hesitation,
    As inner harmony was transformed,
    To outer manifestation,
    Did nothing less than leave indentations,
    In my heart, in my soul.
    Though I knew so little about it,
    I learned quickly through your vibes,
    Vibes passing through the air,
    Piercing the atmosphere,
    Converting thoughts into tunes
    Translating melodies into feelings,
    Changing pure talents into passion,
    And passion into ministry.
    I have adapted your passion,
    And I try to emulate, imitate.
    See, I feel as if you, me, we could relate…
    And stimulate a connection.
    I know you feel me, feeling you,
    And I feel you, possibly feeling me.
    Let us then come together, collaborate,
    If not romantically, then musically…


     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yes how i felt dis here
    if we may then mix away
    to a tune to fill da room
    i feel u and want too hit
    a note or two collaborate
    lay it out str8
    tyte drop i was into it deep
    feel it o how sweet ....wow!
     
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    Chastity, I love the artful infatuation, which you've put to ink so eloquently.
     
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    indeed this was sweet
     
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    this was wonderful...
    Music is my life...my soul
    so this piece was very touching
    Beautiful flow!
     
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    The images here were so sweet and lyrical. This was wonderful!!
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks everyone for your comments on da scribe...Music is my life too and I like to compare what I know to who (loved one) or what (love) I would like to find out more about.
     
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