Black Poetry : Harmony of the Pisceans Sea Poetry(A Bishop & Bluewater Collab)

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (Bluewater)

    I was drawn toward the beam
    A light in my darkest hours
    A tower so firm a guiding light
    Has unleash
    My deepest desire

    cruising gently on the sea
    rolling with the motion
    a trail of ecstasy evolve
    a stirring of emotion


    (Bishop)

    Going about my daily routine
    when I feel a vibe in the air
    someone sailing on Love's Sea
    coming to me

    Suddenly passion overwhelms me
    and I begin to hear words
    carried by the night wind
    words that captivates
    and demand my attention

    I look over the waters
    and I see you
    as beautiful as the dawn
    as it rises from the Sea

    I make preparations for your arrival
    knowing that my fantasies are about
    to be realized


    (Bluewater)

    Slipping into
    A seductive region
    My heart beating rapidly
    Slowly turning
    Inner yeaning
    I do come to thee

    Laid upon the warm sand
    The sea as our symphony
    Body uniting building a fire
    A furious ecstasy

    The waves of the sea,
    boost that need
    willingly, passionately

    you are the fire
    that stirs the desire
    Soothingly...tenderly
    Each stroke release
    Essential need
    Strong feelings
    Do Increase

    The extreme heat
    Of each emotion
    As I lean more into you
    That sensual tongue
    Trace each pulse
    I moan. Surrendering

    The sea is release
    In to a mix
    Holding firm to all of you
    The sandy shore
    A musical symphony
    The harmony of the sea


    (Bishop)

    As our combined essence
    intermingle
    making us one
    consumed in the fire of passion
    we melt into each other's soul
    as we move in sync with
    the motion of the Love's Sea
    our escapade
    is as endless
    as the ripples
    in the water
    each fiber of my being
    flowing deeply
    inside of you
    we create
    a work of poetry
    that
    defines who we are
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i likes this nice you all
    very nice.....Angel
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah thank you sister angle ..:heart:
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yes yes yes
    tyte and y'all
    drop it to perfection
    Da Bishop & Bluewater
     
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    wow!!!!! this is so beautiful!!!!! and I love the Piscean theme, the sea - you both captured it so well. vibin this flow, sistah and brothah
     
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    hey brother rich ..rolling with the motion of :) thank you for the love:heart:

    hey sister gempis...smiling ..ah yes..i am so happy you like the theme..thank you for the love:heart:
     
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    Wow, such beautiful images...
     
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    too tyte!!
    :heart:
    -story:coffee:
     
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    Heeeey Pisces in the House!

    I'm here to strictly represent... :wink:

    I love the flow...the combination was "Aweeesome"
    oh and Blue...you totally had me on that second stanza...loved it
    I suppose I'm a lil' bias...but there's nothing better than a Pisces
    we are the most intriguing, exciting and exotic of the signs...
    naturally artistic and passionate...so if you find one that's a poet
    you know it's going to be a wonderful experience...
    but "2" flowing together... :toast:


    Excellent!
     
  10. PositiveMindset

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    Yes this was definitely nice.

    It was like a gentle, sweet song sang in the most beautiful key.

    Very nice.

    Sister angelic, I believe U have that intriguing, exciting, & exotic sign mixed up with Virgos.
    Everyone knows that we are the epitome of love & splendor.
     
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