Black Poetry : Harmless

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Jul 1, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Breathless and stumbling.
    Stuttering and almost bumbling.
    Heart races and my feet paces;
    a blur of nameless faces.
    Struggling to remember Who,
    What, When, and Where.
    The most important, Who?
    The second most important, Did they
    have it?
    Confusion
    Revulsion
    Liquid fear
    Cold fear and icy sweat.
    What the hell have I done.
    I wait patiently, my mind in chaos.
    The doctor returns.
    "I have your results
    and they are positive."
    A harmless sexual gig gone bad.

    ~Copyright 2004
    ~*PropheticNsyght
     
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    tyte write as love is given
    drop some love to da poet beside u

    given love will recieve love
    a reply will bring a smile
    dis was very nice flow feel me !
     
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    yes i agree
    this is a nice flow
    spreading the love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Some thangs that seem harmless end up to be deadly. Spread the truth.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again I am truly moved. Peace and Blessings
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    PropheticNsyght

    ...a gig? Were you getting paid? :lol:

    It's all right to have fun. But, having fun without using some common sense is costly.

    Nice scribe...scribe. :D

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    so paradoxical...is the mind of most men and women
    when it comes to those "Harmless" yet So "Harmful" gigs...
    Love the way you flipped this...
    and especially the way you weaved in air of
    anticipation and nervousness of waiting for test results

    this is what I like to call an "in your face" kind of scribe
    the kind that is just full of unadulterated TRUTH

    Loved it... :toast:

    Continue to teach...
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again. Angelic...I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Monetary Thank you so much for your love!
     
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