Black Poetry : Harlot

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So you say many would
    love to have me?
    Have me, for what?
    You say this so easily,
    it just flows, like from your gut.
    And I think, certainly
    you couldn't have truly known
    what it meant to be as one,
    another heart to claim your own.
    It was never merely physical,
    but for you, it ended up that way.
    The only thing that remained,
    that linked us was as we lay
    together, and it wasn't really you,
    just your body, this man
    was a stranger, an impostor.
    You still wanted me to say I can.
    Because it hurt when I couldn't,
    cause all you felt was wouldn't,
    instead of knowing we shouldn't.
    If this is what I am wanted for,
    no thankyou. I wasn't a harlot
    when you opened the door,
    and still not after you closed it.
     
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    This was so deep........I was all into this...flow on
     
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    words spoken strong here...i would hope that the one who instilled such thoughts will understand the voice of truth...

    excellent scribe poet...

    one
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad my words could capture you for a minute foxylady, thank you.
    dnommo, the one who instilled this is sort of on another planet, but that's ok....thanks for your praises.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very deep scribe i feel all the emotions flowing here
     
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    flowing straight to the point from the heart...feeling you sis
    Peace
    Blue
     
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    nice drop...
    deep really deep...
    flow on...:angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, bluewater, mzblkangel, thanks for feelin this deep flow.
     
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    Go 'head on Sister !!!!! :toast:

    Loving This !!! See ... now you know i wanna hear this!!! Thanks for joining us in voice chat tonight. Such a pleasure having your company and conversation Sister.

    Much Love and Peace.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Spoken like a LADY!
     
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