Black Poetry : Hard to Let Him Go

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  1. MsInterpret

    MsInterpret Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hard to Let Him Go

    He was not my first love​
    He was my soulmate​
    At any rate​
    I thought we were forever​
    I still possess his love letter​
    He said I was the one​
    After that I was on the run​
    I admit I was wrong​
    To leave and go for so long​
    I thought he would always be there​
    But my judgment was impaired​
    He wanted me to be his wife​
    But I was too young​
    and wasn't ready leave behind my life​
    So I put him on hold​
    Talked bad and treated him cold​
    I didn't deserve what he had to give​
    Or deserve to give him a kid​
    But now he's gone​
    And now I wait for so long​
    For something that may never even be​
    Da-n I long for his company​
    Still remembering his smell​
    His scent is like a love spell​
    My tongue still recalls how he tastes​
    I'd die for one last embrace​
    To feel him inside me one last time​
    And feel like he is still mine​
    I love you Sho​
    But I think this time​
    I need to let you go​
    :cry:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow. this flows like something that would normally be written by a man. funny how role-reversals are popping up everywhere these days. anyway, liked the flow of this...and the message. it is hard letting go. when you do...when you decide to walk away...you need to know that leaving is what you really want to do. if you're not ready to see that person with someone else, you're not ready to walk away. work on whatever issues you need to work on but work it out. love isn't swinging on every bush you meet...most of that's just for the moment. understand that.

    the river floweth
     
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    Thanks Baller!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwww I had to embrace myself after this release
    your heart , emotions and feeling knew what was best
    sometime the light isn't always bright when it comes to love
    the directional path is by heart that will guide you,keep moving

    deep write
     
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