Black Poetry : "hard to get"

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  1. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've been thinkin about you lately,
    see when u were tryna kick game i........
    i wasn't really tryna pay you no mind.

    you tried and you tried and.........
    access was denied.
    i looked at you and smiled and said goodbye.

    when really deep down inside i......,
    wanted to say dang brother u fine.
    you tried so hard, and you just wouldn't give up.

    my little attitude just wasn't enuff,
    then u started talkin conversations of love.
    my friends tellin me, "gurl u know he's the one."

    and when i went home,
    to lay my head to rest,
    i had a dream about you......

    i had a dream about you and..........
    i've been thinking about you lately.

    the phone rings and.....
    and it's you...................
    it's you what should i do?

    let me just tell you how i feel.........
    boy you so fine,
    i gotta make you mine.

    then i hear......click......
    "if you'd like to make a call, please hang up and try again,
    if you need help please hang up and dial ur operator.


    moral of poem: this poem is for those who try to play hard to get see you can't play the game too long because sooner or later the person will give up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. Laydee Chups

    Laydee Chups Active Member MEMBER

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    Well said! Tru say I know wa ur sayin hands on lyk, dats when it hurts da worst bwoi.

    Heavi flow, you captured the stream of consciousness perfectly
     
  3. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a man will only try for so long. we don't take rejection very well.:)

    THANKS FOR SAYING IT.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed in agreement wit Baller
    tyte scribe
     
  6. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yah all;)
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tyte...i'm likin' it...
     
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