Black Poetry : HAPPY BIRTHDAY MOMMY!!!!

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is to the one who wiped tears
    from my eyes when i lyfe saddened me....
    cradled me in her arms though,
    her delicate features showing
    the beauti of her spirit she,
    was a part of me,
    her blood ran in my viens,
    and her laufter filled my ears....

    i would look at her and admire
    the hard work, taht she had to endure
    along with the burdens of raising two children
    and a husband thats not really there....

    through it all her frowns pull dissappearing acts
    putting a smile in its place.....
    though the many scars that crossed her heart
    sometymes shivered her soul
    she would go to God and he would heal....

    She is an inspiration to me...
    so undenialbly sweet
    yet amusingly practical...

    she clothed me when i was cold,
    fed me when i was weak..
    and loved me when i couldn't love myself....

    HAPPY B-DAY MOMMY AND I WISH U MANY MORE TO COME!!!!


    hey can someone move this to the poetry forum...i made a mistake and typed it here...lol...if anyone can i would appreciate it....thank u...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very beautiful and sweet
    sure happy to help
    love this so much it really made my day
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich :heart:
    -story
     
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    this was sooooo sweet:)
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah her birthday was yesterday, just celebrateing one of the greatest days of my and her lyfe.....
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Oh, the story, this was so sweetly written, any mom would treasure these words.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watz, just to let u know my mom taped it to the fridge and said if anyone touches it besides me and her, its there ***...lol
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    wow...this is a beautiful poem:)
    wonderful and so special
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall just doin the best i can rite now...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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