Black Poetry : Happy Birthday Eve

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Hunter, Apr 8, 2001.

  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy Birthday Eve

    It is the
    Eve
    Of my
    Womanhood's
    Birthday

    And
    I sit
    Wondering
    If I have
    Spread my legs
    Wide enough

    Did I
    Forget
    To pick up the eggs
    At the grocery store?

    And
    On my next visit
    To the gynecologist
    Should I ask her
    To replace
    The rubber bands
    Inside my uterus

    With the
    New and improved
    Deluxe

    It is the
    Eve
    Of my
    Womanhood's
    Birthday

    And
    I sit
    Wondering
    If my
    Double-D cup bosoms
    Will ever be
    Full enough

    Oh
    Did I forget
    To iron your shirts
    With starch
    This time

    Or
    Will my
    Hard nipples
    Pressed up against
    Your forefather's skin
    Make you rise
    To this ocassion
    And leave you
    Stiff enough

    And
    It is the
    Eve
    Of my
    Womanhood's
    Birthday

    And
    I sit
    Wondering
    If my
    Painted toe nails
    Will ever point
    Far enough

    Can you see me
    Sitting here
    On the edge
    Of this new horizon

    Wondering

    When the
    History of woman
    Will finally
    Make you feel
    Proud enough

    Or
    Did you forget

    To wish Eve

    A Happy Birthday...


    *From the vagina chronicles*
    All Rights Reserved

    Hunter
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter

    my sustah, I am convinced that the word "Poet" is the superlative for all breathing homo sapiens.

    Happy Birthday POET!!!!! You KNOW I wuz waitin fa dis one!
    :D

    You brought it! :birthday:

    A

    :heart:
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter~

    Ya getz nuttin' but R.E.S.P.E.C.T
    from N2!

    :roll:
    This is mos def' a
    "10"
    cha-ching....ya hit a $million$
    on the slots on wit
    dis one here...
    Happy B-Day!!
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoooooa!!!!

    Hunter,

    I know this fella here asked for mo of the V-chronicles but dayuuum!!!!

    This is tight!!! Hope ya day was a happy one!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  5. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce, GQ, N2U...

    thank-you for the well wishes on my birthday

    And
    I sit
    Wondering
    If all this love
    I have for all of you
    Will ever be
    Deep enough

    *beautifulblackpeopleinpoetry*

    sincerely, Hunter
     
  6. freedom

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    very nice

    happy birth day hunter
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HUNTER....

    you are poetry personified my dear sister!
    & this peace serves to reinforce all dat... :)

    :birthday:...

    & many, many, many more!! continued Peace & Blessings...

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  8. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    freedom, GA...

    thank-you for making this B-day...extra special :)

    Having cake and

    *eating-it-too*
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter! Hunter! Hunter!

    This hea is all FLAME baby girl!!! I cant do nuthin but give you love ma...

    Madd Respect & Happy B-day
    Reas
     
  10. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummhmmmm

    I join the party (with some favors)...er uh um...
    I love this flow Huntress! Happy Birthday to ya, and may you enjoy many, many mojo. Um, more!

    :D

    mojo
     
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