Black Poetry : Happy 66th Birthday

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another birthday has come,
    I'm looking into the rising sun,
    There u are once again,
    Smiling down from heaven,
    I see purple rain,
    Fallin down on me,
    When i look in the mirror at night,
    I feel u in my presence,
    I have seen u smile, and i have seen u cry,
    I comforted u, as i guide u into the eternal light,
    My heavenly angel up above,
    I know u're not here,
    To celebrate this special occasion,
    But up above in heaven,
    U were perpetuous,
    A woman with a heart of gold,
    A hint of spice,
    A heart of soul,
    I'm missin u so much,
    I want to feel your touch,
    I wish u can wipe away my tears,
    To blow the candles off the cake,
    To cook those holiday meals,
    To live again,
    But u live within my heart,
    And as i end this poem,
    May u rest in peace,
    I'll see u when my time comes,
    And when god calls me home.

    I love u.


    AM
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaliyahmonet, the world becomes an entirely different place once a dear loved one passes on. I loved it, thanks for sharing.
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks 1poet for lookin out for a sista.

    1 luv,

    AM
     
  4. luvNwords

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    beautiful job
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is such a beautiful poem:)..Im sure she's smiling down at you right now
     
  6. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks luv and welcome to the destee fam.

    AM:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yes u have touched me and truely seeing it in our
    memories of how it was make it beautiful
    this here was well felt and i too know the feelings
    of a loveone.......thanks for sharing this
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow my sista...
    life is a B...
    but dis a beautiful picture of ya feelings :)
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW....this was beautiful am....
    really emotional.....word s were truly moving....
    the "i love you " at the end was a perfect thing to say....
    remember though mamita...."its only natural to give new life when one ends...so it begins.."

    someone precious will be born in her place.....
    dont have to believe..just feel......
     
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    wow.... you really touch me with this...
    really beautiful....
     
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