Black Poetry : happily ever after...(for my future wife)

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  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my love for us this moment is instrumental
    the intent is not accidental
    please allow me to explain
    life would never be the same
    unless i know everday you were here in some way
    can't replace
    the dynamics of how i feel
    its real
    now i gotta tell you the deal
    can imagine how i got this far
    without your love
    lifting me above the stars
    understand
    i'm just a man
    sometimes i fall short of the glory
    trip
    tumble over
    thats only part of the story
    with you there is a passion that can't be erased
    i want to wake up every morning and see your face
    and at night
    sense your scent as you caress my head
    let your voice be the final thing i hear before bed
    its a shame
    the game trys to make us stop
    we're pressing on my love
    whether they like it or not
    but first let me tell you what you mean to me
    lay it out
    so the whole world can look and see
    what i hold for you is wide as the ocean breeze
    i want you to stand in front
    so i can bow to my kness
    and worship
    the majesty of a true queen
    sent here by grace just to save me
    from the ills
    and the sin
    thats wants to corrupt
    i was falling down fast
    then you came
    told me enough of this playing the players game
    one touch from your eyes
    i would never be the same again
    more than friends
    held me close
    as you stroked my mind
    took your time and helped me find peace
    unwind
    from the demons that had me tied up
    stressed out
    talking crazy and lied up
    and i knew from that moment
    you were the one for me
    i'm laying it down so the whole world can see
    how i feel
    yes its real
    i'll stand strong with you
    no matter what time brings
    or what we go through
    here its is
    all i have to present to you
    is the love, honor and passion Jaylove can do
    cause i need you too
    and its true
    i've found that clue
    beside every good man is his boo
    i'll make it plain
    won't restrain
    so you know what i mean
    i want us to love like the second before the dream
    in time the sun shines upon our souls
    as we walk hand and hand
    reaching our goals
    with the love we share we'll get there faster
    me and you babygirl
    happily ever after...
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she'll like this joynt no doubt...

    peace.
     
  3. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...don't look in the mailbox for invites just yet. when i say my "future" wife i mean i'm still looking...

    thanx for the read j, glad you liked...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Derrick.


    awwww...

    very... very... nice!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    Woooo What Beautiful Lines You Have!

    i want us to love like the second before the dream
    in time the sun shines upon our souls
    as we walk hand and hand
    reaching our goals
    with the love we share we'll get there faster
    me and you babygirl
    happily ever after...


    This is one terrible tight love poem dude!

    :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da beauty inside dis scribe keeps us searching for da one
    that Queen ......when u find her she will love every thing
    about u indeed.........wow!!! write dem words poet!!
     
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    Bravo!
     
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    My goodness... and when you do find her I hope she realizes how lucky she is to have someone feel that way about her and appreciates all that comes with it.

    Wonderful scribe!

    Much :heart:
     
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    FABULOUSLY written! Ahh, the romantic heart speaks!

    This made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!
     
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