Black Haiku : HANDS OFF

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    you can't hold me down
    I started at the bottom
    I can only rise

    given everything
    just missin that silver spoon
    I'm comin real soon

    each day that i rise
    I see the hate in they eyes
    your nothing they say

    well have it your way
    our place was meant to be great
    we rise it's our fate
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I am that i am
    as my uplifting spirit
    rise above any

    U cant hold me, see
    because i am light of life
    my rays is power

    Hands off my mental
    i am thinkable within
    da wareness of life

    My fate is in you
    that we are as one long mate
    hate is not to be
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Others may see me
    As something that is lesser
    than, not equal to

    But in their clouded
    eyes, what they truly see is
    a figment of me

    For I am endless
    The heights I can possibly
    reach, none can fathom

    They may never see
    The depths of me and of you
    It's their loss, not ours...
     
  4. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    wow.......

    I got chills when i read these responses...

    Rich ^^ truly king u r!

    Watz... ^^ i don't even have the words to compliment ... mov'd i am!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You can plainly see
    The struggle toward victory
    Is indeed our goal
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    how did i miss this?


    you are on fire

    your depth even has me in awe

    woow
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    ditto.. Mr. So'ja ..... :) u make me smile :) :) :)
     
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