Black Poetry : Hands of Man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UniqueOne, Jan 26, 2004.

  1. UniqueOne

    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dealing with things
    seems
    hard to do
    when the odds are all against you
    life sometimes feels hopeless
    with no purpose
    yet i keep holding on
    for as long as i can
    determine not to fall at the hands man
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Lord, we feel this sometimes early on...but you keep on going like you are, regardless. Liked the way you wrote this.
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UniqueOne,
    i enjoyed the read and keep holding on, that's a big part of the success. If the enemy can get you to give up the struggle then there is no hope for triumph.

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    nice drop indeed
    keep holding on :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow head on nice drop
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi UniqueOne,

    i liked this piece very much and I think somany can recognize themselves in this. I sure did.
    But don't forget that in time your purpose will find you. "It will find you, you just have to keep your eyes and heart open."

    greets.moham
     
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    "Keep ya head up!"

    This was a touching piece. I could feel the pain, the sorrow, and the resolve to carry on.

    Good one! :toast:







    And :birthday:
     
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