Black Poetry : handling it... (overcast days do it to me)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 28, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these overcast days do it to me
    I look out at the trees
    full of leaves, their branches
    swaying to the rhythm
    of the north wind

    and I can hear you
    breathing softly
    beneath the covers
    a smile blossoms
    all through me
    as you move your
    body closer
    feeling me, dreaming me
    wanting me
    subconsciously

    my hands find their
    way down your long
    body, so warm
    the heat escapes from
    between your thighs
    and without ever
    opening your eyes
    you yield
    your beauty
    full
    and ready
    for my love

    oh I want to love you
    over and over again
    I need to feel your
    arms encircle me
    the palms of your
    warm hands
    caressing my
    back, as you kiss
    me perfectly

    in a moment
    you'll find what's inside-me
    and take us everywhere
    I've always wanted
    to be

    we wait
    for nothing
    there is no
    time
    in this place
    as your
    hips rise and fall
    and undulate
    to the love-rhythm
    of my hands

    these overcast days
    do it to me

    alyce (c) 2002
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's is how rainy days affect me!
    My man calls up and say's it's raining love!
    And we just go for what we know.
    Yesterday was it was raining all day in KC! :)
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope it's an overcast cloudy day come Tuesday ... (when I see my boo again it's gonna be ooooooon) :lol:

    Loved this flow Sustah A.

    N2
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ladies... I'm so feelin y'all feelin me... :):)

    go for whatcha'll know y'all know! :wink:

    a
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    this piece is hot

    whoa

    this is one of the pieces that hit you hard after you finish reading
    no pun of course

    dssNyC
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when you write like this, the thing I love the most about your words is how you make the wonders of nature sound so breathtakingly beautiful..

    K
     
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