Quiet Poetry Lounge : Hand made me a man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Oct 20, 2005.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~~Hand Made Me A Man~~

    I seen a rough cut diamond, laying in the sand
    as I got a little closer, it appeared to be a man

    Since I had nothing, but time on my hands
    I decided to re-mold and re-shape me a man

    I commensed ot build a heart, that would beat in sync with mines
    and a soul that has to be...no other than divine

    His eYes will see, where none shall go
    and as you can see, I got a lot to show

    I'll build you two hands, to hold me tight
    when I need to be held, in the heat of the night

    Your personal parts, will take a little long
    as I attemp to make it....Gentle....yet Strong

    And his body will fit, into mines like a glove
    with fire and desire ...each time we make love

    He can make me speak in tongue, in 9 different tones
    when the right slots are hit, in our comfort zone

    then....

    I stepped back and admired, the creation I just made
    a hand made man...
    ...I'm still in a daze​
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice flow Queen:teach:

    Those men who don't mind being worked in a mold. Are given a true treasure to behold. Dress, and stand. Be that kind of man and see what life has to unfold.

    They say you can't teach a old dog a new trick. But that is false and laid on real thick. Be open for change it is the flow in life. We are rough cut diamonds in the rough. She isn't asking you to give up the man kind of stuff. Just consider some angles that she know about, to approach an issue she is by your side to help out. Be the man.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhh.....so how do i look....lol

    this was awesome sista wow continue to mold da man from ya hand
    i really enjoyed this and love the flava sis.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watch out now, QueenT....Maybe thats wut I'm doing wrong...I should jes hand-make me a woman...She'll probably still beat me up..lol..Anywayz, thanx for writing another great piece!

    Peace,
    Drizz
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just the thought of this sista...a hand made man, wow. This piece puts my mind to thinking how I would mold, or remold one. Enjoyed the creativity and vibe here.
     
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    And every woman should have one.:)
    This is really a tyte drop.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very creative, just when I was about to give up on the dating game, i've got something new to hope for. j/k however I did appreciate this one
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right, can ya just picture that? ..I'd never see the light of day:laugh:
    It was kind of you to bring love here.
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hope is indeed here, if they don't come to suit your taste...make em from stratch!
    thanks so much for the love.
    Really good to see ya active again.
     
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    Know Your Self First*

    Hotep

    The best thing a (Good) woman can do for any (Good) man is to know her self first. Shape herself in "Right-Knowledge" and most of all teach her Children the Truth that is based in Spirituality and Reality of Self. The Good Man will do the same for himself and don't ever need to be or can be shaped by any woman unless it is his Mother while he is still yet a "Child".

    Ase`
     
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