Black Poetry : Hand in Hand

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kemetstry, Apr 4, 2007.

  1. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    On a bed of red rose petals
    We'll make love into the night
    The aroma of scented candles
    to accent our delight

    Come lay down by the fireplace
    I'll massage your cares away
    In your ear hear the melody
    of the sweet words I will say

    - I have loved you since the day we met
    - Whether near or distant land
    - One to one, bringing no regret
    - Life together, hand in hand

    In the darness of the full moonlight
    Two lovers quench their fires
    As the cool breeze blows away their sweat
    And reveals untold desires

    See their glances speak a thousand words
    of a long love now reborn
    As the sunlight greets the coming day
    And the birds' songs greet the morn

    - I have loved you since the day we met
    - Whether near or a distant land
    - One to one, bringing no regret
    - Life together, hand in hand


    by kemetstry

     
  2. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very sweet I enjoyed every word.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very sweet, as soulful said. Your words are so emotive and endearing, they almost drip off the page and spell love.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now droppin it sweet like a sugar cane
     
  5. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    *Blushing*

    Ok now, yall need to stop. Yall making me blush over here :lol:
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kemetstry:
    This scribe is without a doubt
    Breathtakingly Beautiful.

    Much Luv
     
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    *wondering why I feel Kem is talking to me through this poem*:look:

    Kem... you got love on your mind sweetheart? Nice to see the sensual side of you; kinda knew it was always there:spinstar:

    :shades:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats a hott piece poet your letting your creativity pour thats hot
    7/10
     
  9. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    And quit arguing with me in BVs LMAO :bully: :flamet:
     
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    2 Easy

    You've have really grown--this stuff just rolls through the pen barely checking in with the mind because it has already okayed it--I like the way it rolls--bravo--a master is growing--Amun-Ra

    :welldone:
     
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