Quiet Poetry Lounge : Hair

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GeneticSoul, Dec 12, 2003.

  1. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My expression a reflecion on my seccussion that out weighs all my transgressinos not causing me any oppression nordeprssion my regressive veiws on a progressive level
    my... so what if i dont feel like combing it today or my and wat is it that u have to say?
    my hair... expressing my views of my days work adn one fo my lifes many perks
    my subjective statemetn that never says "shes trying tobe someone shes not"
    ok can u tell me what good hair looks like? i think personally that its something that a persons proud of and what theyve got not what their genes just happen to give them
    but a peroson who can express thier ambitions through thier hair
    besides a bad hair day only happens to everyone!
    u know those days when u wake up and youre hair is smashed to one side...
    i dont need extentions, braids, prems or what not to feel pretty
    cuz IM beautiful..
    Ohh ohh and just becuz i know what to do to my hair doesnt me that i have a good grade of hair.. Believe u me that its hella hard to do every day
    if i feel like doing things too it doesnt me that im trying to be someone else it means that im just trying find myself... but dont get me worng all those torture things like dye and press or a wet set... i know where to go get it..
    u know that lil place on 89th st. ya thats where i go... sh(t i know uk now...
    It like i said... u know expression...reflextion... but id still like for u to understand that its just me and my hair plain and simple... im another statistic so stop questioning me.
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a nice drop
    i can't help but smile
    very nie
    peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a joy from dis scribe
    ya pen speaks so continue on !
    very nice
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with Bluewater and $$RICH$$, this one made me laugh. I'm glad you got the strength of conviction to be yourself, GeneticSoul. That's really cool.
     
  5. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aye yo

    yall fa reals its like i dont even know how u do it but being apart of this family really puts a smile on my face... thanks

    Gen~ETHIC Soul
     
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