Black Haiku : haiku

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    i can smell souls press'd
    against the roof of your mouth
    so much death-i'll cry



     
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    When I taste your tongue
    I taste old lies in past time
    Crying broken hearts
     
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    Crossing bodies, I
    only feel sad sorrow of
    deadly warth on me
     
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    When the peppermint
    No longer lingered, the truth
    reeked of fresh maggots
     
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    i thought our lips touched
    alas it was deathly breath
    flowing out to find.... air
     
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