Black Haiku : haiku

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  1. deepy

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    the pages are blank
    the mind an eddy deepening
    how blue the sky is
     
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    page dry pen lost in
    the mindful visional mist
    of grey cloud above
     
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    Grey skies will clear up
    Not due to a happy face
    But because of faith
     
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    Gray clouds rain black ink
    mix blood and with my inner thoughts
    view my masterpiece
     
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    rain and mist and fog
    clutters my landscape, too dark
    please show me the light
     
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    kentes face stops me
    my mind shudders and cries to
    so much self hatred




    (not your face Kente..just the one you are showing..and i couldn't remember what that icon(is it icon) is called...not personal)
     
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    I mentioned that face
    in another post, it stops
    me dead in my tracks....
     
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    showered deeply in
    the mist of the darken soul
    to canvas i lay
     
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    sadness rides the waves
    an avatar cause schisms
    the page stays empty
     
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    ink fade written word
    the fate looms to canvas in
    the depth of my pen
     
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