Black Haiku : haiku

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  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    tears of morning dew
    smells heavenly human scent
    the brown earth looks up

    dust and ashes swirl
    the insects antennas sniff
    new beginnings form



    (i am trying to make this about life forever continuing
    that all is circular...I need help..flow on it)
     
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    A new beginning
    moon fades and sun rises up
    shines strength for new life
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da circle of life
    mankind in forever pools
    walk earthly boundries
     
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    Neverending breath
    forever be the essence
    til there's nothing left
     
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    Shook hands in Eden
    Multiplied in Africa
    Forever reborn
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    neverending breath
    inhaling,exhaling life
    floating in the air




    thanks yawl..i'm seeing
    feeling the circular life
    connecting thru you
     
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    world hums around me
    look up into clear, dark sky
    beauty, the heavens
     
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    out of emotions
    lay hope in life and prayer
    unto heavens door
     
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    a circular chain
    spanning all the universe
    continual life
     
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    neverending loop
    nature is stuck on replay
    turn over the tape :hammer:
     
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