Black Haiku : Haiku You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Muse, Aug 18, 2004.

  1. Muse

    Muse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thought Maybe I'd ask
    to express a poets truth
    Can I Haiku You?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    from my inner me
    haiku away as u please
    flow da truth of u
     
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    now we're all waiting
    patiently to be haikued
    hit us with some truth ;)
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    can you haiku me?
    with syllables of beauty,
    seventeen? oh yeah!
     
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    Drop those syllables
    Let us see what you can do
    five, five and seven...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Three short deep verses
    Emotions spill to the page
    Soak up my haiku
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    exqusite nature
    mournful and beautiful love
    ablazing haiku
     
  8. Muse

    Muse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Haiku You....hmmmm lets see


    So Sir Rich of scribe
    I'm feeling your vibe in here
    come for more my dear ;)

    I'm soaking you up
    sponging words watzinaname
    igniting word play ;)

    Five, Five, and Seven
    I'm trying to be flavored
    angelicsage like ;)

    So you get deepy?
    Something shovel like in flow?
    just haiku to show :)

    Kimdericka of soul
    Bold in new walk and spirit
    blessed with "sista" hips :x:

    any rebuttals? lol
     
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    musing in da depth
    of ya lines scribe within u
    feeling ya haikus
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    a poetic muse
    soothing rumbling volcanoes
    nature-al haiku
     
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