Black Haiku : Haiku Sequence

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Scry'be, May 22, 2007.

  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 22, 2007
    Messages:
    174
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1
    can u see me walk
    in haiku? my hands itch to
    rape ur words' intent.


    we gon righteously
    dip our finga's in sun light
    and throw our voices

    watch me step toward God
    and hurl my rivers at Him,
    impregnate my smiles

    in the end he loves
    me-see him paint my birth canal
    with divinity!


    'House of Atreus' Publishing 2007
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2001
    Messages:
    7,648
    Likes Received:
    40
    Occupation:
    thrivin' spiritually/physically/emotionally/financ
    Location:
    where failure is not an option
    Ratings:
    +42
    welcome

    that first one was off the scale

    very deep haikus in my opininon

    peace
     
  3. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 22, 2007
    Messages:
    174
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1
    Peace and Purpose to you street so'ja!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    Walking carefully
    where written word is so strong
    through every intent

    this was tyte poet ya pen is talking and yo creation is awesome
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Intently I hear
    the echos of our refrain
    in lofty breezes
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    May 25, 2001
    Messages:
    4,182
    Likes Received:
    170
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Spreading Joy.... need some?
    Location:
    Sixburgh, Pa.
    Ratings:
    +220
    Great write! Very much enjoyed!

    Souldeep
    Coco
     
  7. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 22, 2007
    Messages:
    174
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1
    thank you all for your words and support.
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - Haiku Sequence
  1. ititiiti
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    264
  2. Randee
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    295
  3. Nahshon
    Replies:
    1
    Views:
    505
  4. alyce
    Replies:
    6
    Views:
    1,320
  5. Dre Money
    Replies:
    5
    Views:
    1,071