Black Haiku : haiku me (double dip)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Jun 19, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    get inside my skin
    seventeen syllables deep
    three lines at a time

    take hold of my lips
    as your fingers slip between
    I'll recite your rhyme

    alyce (c) 2002
     
  2. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    say when

    BRB
     
  3. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping:Now gurl, this is so terrible tight that it's bout to snap. You eva reada poem dat you wished you had wrote. Dat's sho nuff the way I feel bout dis uh chile. Excellent, Excellent, REAL Excellent!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Alyce i'm in aweeeeee!
    da way u flow perfection
    now who dippin' who


    U go gurlllllll))))))
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce, ma sista'...this piece is truly tyght!
     
  6. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    did I mention that this is ridiculously sexual while at the same time excitingly literary with vast poetic appeal? :D

    workin it like a 9 2 5 wit some crazy ovatyme MMA....yes ya iz! :heart:

    S~M
     
  7. SistaMoon

    SistaMoon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats fly !
     
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